Mid-Week Crisis

So far this week, it has been pretty hectic to say the least... This is only because I had two midterms and a lot of hours at work. I haven't had much sleep, but I'm going strong and determined to finish the week strong. I'm done with midterms, and ready to get back on track with my writing class. In the picture above, I was asked to the Circle K banquet by my friends Richard and Sharon, whats funny was that I was planning on asking Sharon that night too!

Last week we peer reviewed papers within my social media campaign groups, and I think it went pretty good. I was actually able to get some good criticism, unlike other peer review sessions in the past. I personally could've spent a bit more time peer reviewing my group mates paper, but I ended up prioritizing that assignment last. This I feel guilty, and upset about. I have looked over my group mates papers over again, and given some small advice in person; however.

For my recession process of the HCP, I will begin by going over my paper and fixing all the grammar and spelling mistakes. Once then I will reword some confusing sentences, some of which was pointed out to me by my peers and professor. After this, I will continue my research and lengthen my essay. Then, I will go back and review the lengthened essay once again. If possible, I will try to have my essay reviewed once more at the writing center, or by someone with previous writing 39c experience.

One of the big problems in my essay that I felt wasn't pointed out was mainly tactical, like the length of my essay and how I did not include a works cited page.